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Love gone wrong Pt 1

HobbiesCreative Writing

3 weeks ago

 Zoe and Craig fought yet again. It had been a while since there last fight Zoe thought. She also thought that that would be the lie she would tell most of her friends when they found out. 

Zoe and Craig had a weird relationship. Only 10 months had gone by since they first met and yet the constant fighting made it feel like 10 years. Zoe was your average looking girl, or at least that what she would like to think. 6 foot 4, brown hair and eyes, with enough curves to get her self-esteem screaming for help. No Zoe wasn't a large curvaceous girl, she just had a low self-esteem. Craig was also average looking. Mousy brown hair, blue eyes and tattoos covering his body. Craig was somewhat of a 'bad boy' or at least over the past few years obtained that image. 

Zoe lay on her bed, her eyes puffy and red from all the crying. Craig had said some nasty things to Zoe and she was hurt. But at the same time, Zoe was no angle, she had also retaliated and said nasty things to Craig. How did we get to this? How did I get to his? These were common sentence that ran through Zoe's mind everyday of her life since the day she met Craig, well not the exact day she met him, but rather the day they first kissed. 
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I Never Stop Thinking About You

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3 weeks ago

Another insert for Fragments of Fiction

"Oh, I know (oh, I know)
That the music's fine
Like sparkling wine
Go and have your fun
Laugh and sing
But while we're apart
Don't give your heart to anyone
But don't forget who's taking you home
And in whose arms you're gonna be
So darlin', save the last dance for me, mmmm"


Baby, don't you know
I love you so
Can't you feel it when we touch
I will never, never let you go
I love you oh, so much

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Meeting Our Twin

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3 weeks ago

Sure, you have heard that everyone has a twin out there somewhere and, like most people, you have dismissed this notion as pure fantasy for the lack of proof. The idea that everyone has a twin is a relatively new theory brought about by the vast number of humans inhabiting the globe. With all these people there has to be two people that look the same. However fantastical this may sound, this document will scientifically prove and expand this simplistic theory. Yes, we have a twin out there and they live on a separate plane of reality that we visit through our dreams and moments of déjà vu.
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A Different Time and Place

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3 weeks ago

I grew up in the city, but, unlike the weekend warriors, my mother would take my younger sister and me camping from the day after school let out for the summer until the day before school started in the fall. For almost three months out of the year, I lived in a tent at Old Man’s Cave, under the stars and away from the distractions of the television and radio. This time of my life, 20 years later, has left such a deep impression on me that even now, closing my eyes I am actually walking among the hills of Hocking County, Ohio. It is early morning, my favorite time of the day, the birds are just starting their morning tunes while the embers of the previous night’s fire still smolder in the fire-ring, emitting small tendrils of sweet smelling smoke. The smell of bacon frying from the campsite next to us brings my little sister out of her sleep while mom is already in the cook tent, preparing to fix our breakfast. Off in the distance, faint sounds of life: pots clanging together, camper doors clicking shut, tent zippers and gossamer waves of unintelligible voices, fill the trees. The morning air is still moist from the morning dew, refreshing my senses, as the sun’s rays poke through the thick canopy of the pine forest. After breakfast, I collect my fishing poles and tackle box and head to Rose Lake to watch the fog lift off the water. As afternoon rolls around, I am sitting on the banks over looking the crystal clear water of Rose Lake, fishing pole in hand, dreaming of catching that big bass and taking the long way back to the campsite, making sure to pass as many other campers as possible to show off my catch. As the sun gets hotter and hotter, the sound of the crickets is almost deafening as each try either to out chirp the other for bragging rights or to just to see how loud they can actually get. I spend most of the afternoon walking around the seven-acre lake, admiring the flora and fauna that make Hocking Hills one of the most unique areas in all the state. As I round the bend into a cove, I see my “pet” Whitetail Fawn and, as we have done every day for the last two weeks, we both freeze in our tracks, staring eye to eye at each other for a few seconds, before she snorts at me and gracefully hops off into the deep forest. As the day gets hotter, I hide my fishing poles under a huge spruce tree and head off for my afternoon hike through the cooler valleys and hollows. Below the dam of Rose Lake is a place where most campers seldom venture. Many years of water erosion have carved the sandstone into a 100-foot deep cut in the earth creating Rose Hollow. There is not a regulated path or trail down to the bottom but with careful steps, I make it to the bottom in under a half an hour. The soft sandstone beneath the harder stone of the rim’s shell gave away many thousands of years ago forming a wide mouthed cave behind a thin waterfall. The air is generally 15 degrees cooler down here and the smell of the fresh earth and pine needles calms the soul and sends my spirit soaring, bringing me closer to the creator than any church, synagogue or temple could ever hope of achieving. After my 30 minutes or so of spiritual cleansing, I set off through the hollow for my daily five-mile hike, following the fast flowing creek that forms Old Mans Cave to end up at the swimming pool. I spend only a few minutes here cooling off because this is always the most crowded area of the campgrounds. This, naturally, is where all the weekend warriors congregate and I can only take so much of it. After I am refreshed, I complete my afternoon circle back at the lake, retrieve my fishing pole and fish my way back to the lower end of the camp grounds to our campsite to start my evening chores; chopping firewood and preparing the fire ring for the nights camp fire. As evening rolls around and the other campers return form the pool, I can hear the ever-persistent sounds of children playing on the playground. The “squeak… squeak” of the old chain link swing is like the “tick tock” of an old clock, which slowly bores its way into my permanent memory bank. The smells of many different meals being whipped up assaults me and makes me hungrier and hungrier and, as the sun slowly sinks towards the horizon we sit down to our evening meal that, after a long summers day, never tasted better and give thanks for all that our creator has given us. After dinner, I start the campfire and we all sit down to roast, or in the case of my sister burn, marshmallows make S’mores and spend some quality time with each other, telling stories about the adventures of the previous years camping trips. My mother starts by reminding us, on this warm clear evening, of the year it seemed like it rained the entire summer, forcing us to cut trenches around our leaky tent to try to keep our bedding dry. My sister, as usual, retells the story of the summer I accidentally stuck a red-hot skewer in her eye, which resulted in an evening spent in the emergency room where, thankfully however, no permanent damage occurred to her eye. Not wanting to be outdone, I tell the story of the summer that I got poison ivy so bad that I needed shots from the hospital, just to calm the swelling and itching. As nighttime draws near, I take my final hike of the day up the road to the shower house. It is about a 30-minute walk, which I stretch out to about an hour as I pause for a few minutes, every now and again, to look up at the multitude of stars and try to imagine infinity. I continue walking pausing again as I hear laughter coming from a nearby camp and listen in on parts of conversations that have no meaning to anyone but the speaker and his listeners. After my shower, I slowly meander my way back to the tent, again pausing to admire the pinprick holes in the night sky and listening to the comforting sounds of tree frogs and the now hushed and more subdued voices from the nearest camp. It has been nearly 20 years since I have been camping at Old Man’s Cave but, to this day, I can still hear the sounds of campfires popping and crackling, children laughing and that rhythmic swing. I can still smell the S’mores, the pine needles, the bacon frying and the logs… and marshmallows, burning. I still feel the chilled morning air on my skin or the hot sun beating down on me, forcing me to seek the coolness of the low valleys and the itch of poison ivy. Yes, it has been nearly 20 years, but closing my eyes now, I can still see my “pet” fawn, hopping off through the woods to her next grazing area, or see every single detail of Rose Hollow, from the outer rim to the boulders that have washed down the creek bed. When the hustle and bustle of life gets to me and I need to take a break, no matter where I am, all I have to do is close my eyes and instantly transport to a different time and place.
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The Ride of Helios

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4 weeks ago

Deep in the heart of the Appalachian Mountains winds, a 2,174-mile trail called the Appalachian Trail. Starting in Springer Mountain in Georgia, the Appalachian Trail passes through 15 states and more than 60 federal, state, and local parks and forests, ending in Baxter Park in Maine. A good friend of mine and I hiked a 100-mile section of this trail through the Shenandoah National Park and witnessed some of the most beautiful scenes of nature I have ever seen. We were on our second to the last day of our 2-week long trip, the shadows were getting longer and longer and the late spring air was getting cooler. The trail started into a steep incline and, according to our map, crested at the top of the highest point in Shenandoah. It would be very close to dark by the time we reached the top and we knew that we needed to hurry if we were to make it in time to set up camp with some light. Proud maples fighting valiantly for sunlight against the massive oaks and hemlocks surrounded us on all sides as the younger saplings and sprouts raced towards the top of the canopy to join their place in the sunlight. The semi-rocky dirt trail, at times, was so steep that we had to grab hold of roots and saplings both for keeping our balance against the 50-pound packs on our backs that threatened to topple us over backwards if we dared to let go, as well as to aid our weary legs that argued painfully with every forced step. The sweet smells of Mother Nature filled our burning lungs with each labored breath as the days final light blossomed into many different shades of blues, reds and yellows. Thin, nonthreatening, wisps of dark clouds streaked across the canvas of the brilliantly painted sky as we finally reached the top and started setting up camp. The area surrounding our campsite was deep in shadows and the pre-night sky was fading into dark shades of deep blue by the time we finally got the tent set-up, prepared our supper and hung our packs out of the reach of the bears. This was, by far, the most demanding hike we had in the fourteen days on the trail. So, after about an hour by the campfire and anxious to see what sights awaited us in the morning light we retired to the tent for some much needed rest. I was the first to awake, and looking at my watch saw that dawn was just an hour away. The air was still very chilly so I decided to light a small fire in the prearranged fire pit and then brewed up a pot of coffee. The night sky was still full of stars and to the east, I could see that the sky was just starting to get a bluish hue, signaling the beginning of the new day. As I sat drinking my coffee, the stars slowly faded as the dark blue of the eastern sky gradually took on brighter tones of oranges and yellows. Sitting on top of that north to south running ridge, under the short, stubby, wind warped trees, I could look out to the east and see the entire Shenandoah Valley and the adjacent mountain range far off on the horizon. The valley was shrouded in a milky white fog, the air was still, and all was quiet, even the sounds of the tree frogs and crickets went silent as if in eager anticipation, as the last of the stars flickered out signaling that the show was about to begin. The sky continued to brighten, changing from deep blues, oranges and yellows to such a magnificent brilliance that the sky itself seemed like it would just explode at any second. As my heart raced in anticipation of the finale of the beginning of the new day, the sun exploded on the horizon and I witnessed Helios start his morning run across the heavens. I stared at the brilliant orb, unblinking and transfixed, until the applauds from the birds, singing their songs of praise, drove me out of my state of awe. My friend woke up a few minutes after the show and we ate breakfast, loaded our packs and cleaned up the area so that there was no trace of our brief visit. For the next hour or so, I followed the bouncing purple sunspot behind my eyes, down the trail back to the car to end our trip. Fifteen days of hiking in the wilderness, along the Appalachian Trail in the Shenandoah National Park, through majestic pine forests, proud hardwood forests, sweet smelling fields and cool valleys, I could not have asked for a better ending to a perfect trip than to watch the sunrise on that last morning..
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Alone In The Dark

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5 weeks ago

Originally posted at: Alone In The Dark 

Samantha said that one of the biggest differences between men and women is that a man doesn't understand fear in the same way that a woman does. In a rather crude manner she suggested that the "hanging appendage" had only one useful purpose and that beyond that it was a tool for mischief. Good old Sammie J. had an interesting point.

I always pay attention to what is going on around me in a dark parking lot, but I truly don't spend any real time worrying about getting mugged. Some of that comes from being male and some of it comes from the neighborhood I used to call home. It wasn't a place that you wanted to spend time in, at least not outdoors. Survival dictated that you learned how to read a situation...quickly. National Geographic described it well, it was fight or flight. There wasn't anything in between.

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